| Chris "Sajjuk-khar" "Suian-rah" "Akasa Yodhinah" ( |
Very complex and alluring writing style. While imagery is present, it's done so through more "covert" means as through the conversation and keys. I can certainly picture the two characters well despite the lack of description (a good thing for this style). The play between the characters was very interesting, and the characters rich in personality.
Was there a subtle overtone of malicious intent from the female? She seemed to be expertly cool and almost coniving in the way she presented her feelings... Snooty-actress-murderer-type-esque.
*Rambles on in most definitely a wrong presumption*
[Manifestation13]: Well its good to see an update from you, now to kill my rambling comrade persona.
Was there a subtle overtone of malicious intent from the female? She seemed to be expertly cool and almost coniving in the way she presented her feelings... Snooty-actress-murderer-type-esque.
*Rambles on in most definitely a wrong presumption*
[Manifestation13]: Well its good to see an update from you, now to kill my rambling comrade persona.